Comments on: The Temptation http://www.spinozablue.com/2009/11/3089/ An Eclectic Journal of the Arts Tue, 07 Feb 2012 21:16:29 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: Robert Mueller http://www.spinozablue.com/2009/11/3089/#comment-613 Robert Mueller Wed, 25 Nov 2009 06:49:54 +0000 http://www.spinozablue.com/?p=3089#comment-613 The moon development, with offshooting metaphor shower, in stanzas 3 and 4 is especially gladdening and "blacklit" is an inspired find, for me, as it says so much in one little word in conjuring "dimly lit backroom" and the delicious pleasure in retrospect that goes with that scene or any similar scene in the "back", in private, coming by surprise, etc. Should I seem to misread the lines, it's only to show that the poem's ending phrases are rich with implication.<div class="comment-remix-meta"><a href="#" class="replyto" onclick="replyto('613','Robert Mueller'); return false;">Reply</a> - <a href="#" class="quote" onclick="quote('613','Robert Mueller','The moon development, with offshooting metaphor shower, in stanzas 3 and 4 is especially gladdening and \"blacklit\" is an inspired find, for me, as it says so much in one little word in conjuring \"dimly lit backroom\" and the delicious pleasure in retrospect that goes with that scene or any similar scene in the \"back\", in private, coming by surprise, etc. Should I seem to misread the lines, it\'s only to show that the poem\'s ending phrases are rich with implication.'); return false;">Quote</a></div> The moon development, with offshooting metaphor shower, in stanzas 3 and 4 is especially gladdening and “blacklit” is an inspired find, for me, as it says so much in one little word in conjuring “dimly lit backroom” and the delicious pleasure in retrospect that goes with that scene or any similar scene in the “back”, in private, coming by surprise, etc. Should I seem to misread the lines, it’s only to show that the poem’s ending phrases are rich with implication.
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